Remidial inggris

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Karena temanku telah mempublikasikan tugas inggrisnya,, maka atas permintaan dia dan atas keinginanku sendiri terbitlah post ini. hahahaha. bahasanya. ツ

Yah. Karena kemaren aku remed inggris mendapat tugas membuat karangan yang berjudul ‘Me and My Life’,, aku ingin mempublikasikan karanganku ini didukung oleh temanku. Dia sendiri telah mempublikasikan hasil karyanya sendiri.

Isi karangan ini adalah tentang diriku dan kehidupanku secara garis besar dan sangat singkat sekali. Dalam karangan ini dititikberatkan pada Conditional Sentences dan Sub-ordinating Conjunction. Bisa dilihat dari kalimat atau kata yang di Bold and Italic.

Let’s check this out!

Me and My Life

My name is Agatha Leonita Dianpratiwi. But my friends just call me Agatha. I live with my grandmother, my parents, my sister, my brothers, my cousin and my housemaid’s family. My parents have a home at Jalan Susilo Raya No. 16, Grogol. I live in that house. But I wish if I grow up to adult, I will have an apartment. I will live in that apartment until I marry. But if I pregnant, I will buy a house and live in that house. Because live in home is better than live in apartment for child.

I am really interesting about technology, especially computer, cellular phone and internet. I like to fill my cellular phone and my computer with any programs and games. I am very happy because there is unlimited connection of internet in my home. So I am able to surf and browse internet everyday. Because of that, I have a blog now. Blog is an online journal, where I can write and my writing can be seen by other people who open my blog. If my computer weren’t connected to the internet, I might not have any blog.

Although watching television makes me feel boring, I like to watch football in television. Because I am the fan of Real Madrid. Real Madrid in English means The Kingdom of Madrid. Real Madrid is a football club from Spain. I really like Real Madrid very much, because Iker Casillas is a member of Real Madrid’s team. Iker Casillas is a goalkeeper of Spain’s football team and Real Madrid’s football club. He is a skipper on Spain’s football team, and he is also cute, handsome, great body shape, smart, cool, and so on. So I love him. If I was his girlfriend, I would feel like the luckiest girl in the world, because I think he is almost perfect man. I have a dream. If I have a lot of money, I will go to Spain. And of course I will go to Santiago Bernabeu so that I can meet Iker Casillas.

I have some hobbies. One of them is listening to the music. But I don’t have any favorite music. I like to listen goos music. Nowadays, I am crazy with David Archuleta. He is a runner up of American Idol Season 7. He has a very beautiful and strong voice. He is seventeen years old, though. He is so amazing that a lot of people love him. He was sang some beatiful songs while he was in American Idol, such as Smoky Mountain Memories, Don’t Let The Sun Go Down On Me, Angels, Think of Me, Imagine, and so on. I really love him. I was thought he could be the winner of American Idol Season 7, but his opponent won. I was shocked while the result being read. But I must face the reality. Because it’s life!

Aku sangat yakin sekali,, di dalam karanganku ada banyak kesalahan. Maka dari itu,, bagi yang tahu kesalahan dari grammar yang aku pakai di atas,, bisa memperbaikinya. Sehingga dapat membantuku juga untuk belajar Inggris. Karena kemampuan bahasa Inggrisku memang sangat pas-pasan sekali. Hampir kurang malah. hehehehehehe

Jadi ditunggu yah perbaikannya. hehehehe ツ